tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005295521453303794.post3547509458501898066..comments2012-11-01T19:20:54.291-07:00Comments on Write From the Heart: Purposeful ParagraphingFaye Tollisonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10113348457975392252noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005295521453303794.post-43060950650029630542012-07-17T17:39:17.320-07:002012-07-17T17:39:17.320-07:00Thanks, Elysabeth. It really is a must for a write...Thanks, Elysabeth. It really is a must for a writer to have an editor and readers. They do see things we miss in our proofreading and self-editing.<br /><br />FayeFaye Tollisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10113348457975392252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8005295521453303794.post-53791735359420259702012-03-17T13:59:55.839-07:002012-03-17T13:59:55.839-07:00I have a friend who writes really long paragraphs ...I have a friend who writes really long paragraphs and I do have to call her out on that sometimes when I'm editing her stories (not that I've had to edit anything of hers in a while). I on the other hand tend to write short, to the point sentences and paragraphs so I tend to fall short on the descriptive aspect in my stories. That's where my editors come in to play - they help make those very short paragraphs into wonderful, just the right length paragraphs.<br /><br />Great posting and food for thought. E :)<br /><br />Elysabeth Eldering<br />Author of Finally Home, a YA paranormal mystery<br />"The Proposal" (an April Fools Day story), a humorous romance ebook <br />"The Tulip Kiss", a paranormal romance story<br />"Bride-and-Seek", a paranormal romance story<br />http://elysabethsstories.blogspot.com<br />http://eeldering.weebly.comelysabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07052446855668120700noreply@blogger.com